I like the start and the ending, I can see that you experimented in the middle, the part between 35-38 second mark where you introduce some new sound kida puts the tempo off. You could also experiment with adding more vocals and then buidling up the tempo in the middle.
Like around 50 second you cut off the background music and just let the vocals out, add some noise to make it sound like a recording from old tapes and then reintroduce the music.
At 1.28 mark I think you added a another sound which worked quite well. Also, I can hear the noise in the background while the track is running, it maybe be due to the vocals or some other loop.
Overall, I like your work and it takes creative thinking to get the flow right. Keep it up .
LouisCypher
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Like around 50 second you cut off the background music and just let the vocals out, add some noise to make it sound like a recording from old tapes and then reintroduce the music.
At 1.28 mark I think you added a another sound which worked quite well. Also, I can hear the noise in the background while the track is running, it maybe be due to the vocals or some other loop.
Overall, I like your work and it takes creative thinking to get the flow right. Keep it up
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